For my paper 2 revision, I took some time by going through and proof reading my paper looking for any mistakes or for any parts that were not needed. Throughout my revising, I noticed that I had a lot of comma errors and sentence structure issues. So, those are the two main revisions I focused on the most for this paper. Of course, there were other small mistakes like spelling errors, but they were easy ones to fix. Whereas the commas and sentence structure was a bit of a mess for me to fix because I had a harder time revising this stuff. While making these revisions, and fixing my paper, I realized that I was still confused on how to exactly know where I needed to put a comma and where I needed to put in a colon or semicolon.  At the end of this paper and onto the next one, I was able to correctly revise my own paper where there needed to be an error fixed.

In today’s world, we sometimes fall short in having conversations with people; especially when it comes to having a conversation with people you don’t know.  

1. People in today’s society fall short in having a conversation

In today’s world, we sometimes fall short in having conversations with people.