Parallels that I see between or among the readings and sources is that they all have to do with being understanding and empathetic. It interest me that these people are coming to realizations that understanding others and feeling emotions of others and sharing experiences can really change people.

For paper 2, I would like to have better writing than what I had for paper 1. I want to use stronger sentences and stronger use of transition words. I want this paper to be more powerful. Maybe have it have more feelings in it. A global revision that I should cover better in the next paper is better placement of commas, colons, and semi-colons.