In my first paper, I made the following errors throughout my essay. They were small mistakes like using the wrong word or not using a semicolon or colon in the right place.

In my second paper, I think I made less errors than I made in the first paper. A majority of my mistakes were again semicolon and colon mess-ups and not putting single quotes inside quotation marks.

In my paper 2, I was able to show the ability that my local revisions to my typical errors are that they show that I was able to learn how to understand how to correctly correct any error mistakes that were found throughout my paper.  I made sure that I was doing these local revisions right because I wanted my paper to sound academically correct and wanted all my words to sound important and worth someone having to read it.